A great dynamic angle, I like the texture and the colour choice is ok. The blue line segregates the blurbs in an awkward way. By this I mean the line "creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes" seems dislocated by the blue line.
The last lines in the paragraphs have huge rivers (the type is spaced way too far apart). There are a number of ways to correct this—here are a few; forced line breaks, adjustment or correction of justification. Also try setting justification with last line left aligned. Or, try shortening the line length, some hyphenation could also correct this. There are too many different paragraph alignments going on making this an overly busy piece
I have made a tutorial for this. But i submitted this on June 2 and that was submitted on June 20. Meaning I was the first to submit between the two similarities. I don't know if you would consider the link there as a rip.
The blue line segregates the blurbs in an awkward way. By this I mean the line "creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes" seems dislocated by the blue line.
The last lines in the paragraphs have huge rivers (the type is spaced way too far apart). There are a number of ways to correct this—here are a few; forced line breaks, adjustment or correction of justification. Also try setting justification with last line left aligned. Or, try shortening the line length, some hyphenation could also correct this.
There are too many different paragraph alignments going on making this an overly busy piece
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Just to let you know, in case it was a rip.
But i submitted this on June 2 and that was submitted on June 20. Meaning I was the first to submit between the two similarities. I don't know if you would consider the link there as a rip.